Works in Progress Critique

Here is the plan that I am going to shoot for over Thanksgiving break! My two little cousins are coming in from out of town and I am doing a photoshoot with them so I would like to do this as a keepsake for my aunts.

http://boulderbabyphotography.com/blog/index.php/2010/03/18/the-long-awaited-hd-video-boulder-colorado-family-photographer/